Wednesday, November 14, 2007

annotated bibliography revision ideas

To revise this asignment, I would like to clarify why this topic matters to the acedemic community. Also, I have been told my style of writing is "droning". I need to consider that not everyone reading this essay is as interested in the topic as I am. I will be adding at least a sixth source before the final draft is due so I will meet the requirement for sources.

1 comment:

KaldariaQ said...

lol. Yeah....

You could make it very interesting for people who have never read it, or don't think about racism that much but thats not the way it is atm.